Recount: Immersion Assembly

 

WALT: structure a recount using detailed and descriptive language.
When people read this recount they should feel interested and excited. This week we have been finding out all our new topic for the term and you are going to create a recount about our immersion assembly we had on Monday. Complete the planning section below before you start writing your recount. 

 

Introduction	Yesterday at the immersion assembly we found out what our inquiry topic is about.
Senior Management Team	The senior management team dressed up in silly costumes
Team One	Team one did a Tv show about connecting emotints
Team Two	Team two did how kiwi saved the forest
Team Three	Team threes play was based on Matilda the musical
Team Four	Team 4 did guess the body emoting
Team Five	Team five did cinderella
Conclusion

 

Start your writing here 

Yesterday at the immersion assembly Mr Burt finally came back from recovering from his back surgery. Mr Burt and the senior management team came up on to the stage and they pulled out a box of costumes. They started to pull the costumes out and started putting them on. Mr Sommerville dressed up as spiderman and he even had a water gun and sprayed it at all of the kids. Mrs Noa dressed up as Mrs incredible and she said something about losing Mr incredible. Mr Jacobson dressed up as an army soldier and he was marching all across the stage. Finally Mr Burt dressed up as an egyptian ferro and he said that we were all of his slaves and he was commanding us to pick up rubbish. Then he finally finished doing his act and then he finally said its team ones item. Team one had their item filmed like it was a TV show. We had to guess how they were feeling from their body language. Mrs Hockley was the boss of the TV show and she said whoever did the best won a pot of gold coins. In the end of the challenge Mrs Hockley won the gold for being a good TV show host.

Then Mr Burt demanded for team 2 to come out and he also demanded that we all sat up and behave.

 

Then team 2 came out and they did (how kiwi saved the forest) Tane mahuta and said that all of the trees were being eaten and so one bird had to stay on the forest floor so they could eat all of the bugs eating away the trees.   

My first reaction to this photo is that it is very simple and basic which i like because its nothing to overboard like to abstract. If i was able to tell the artist a question it would be what inspired him to paint the photo. I think the artist created this work because he wanted to show the world that he was able to paint and i think he wanted to show off his impressive art work to everyone around the world

 

This photo was taken in Hawaii and we can see that there is a very long bridge towering over the calm dark blue sea. We can also see in the background that there are lots of tall buildings which might mean there is a town located where all of the buildings are. it is also looking like a hot day because there are barely any clouds in the sky and because it is a bright day. there are also little rocks right next to where the photo has been taken and the little bushes.